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SF FanFiction, Final Chapter Final Chapter: Close Your Eyes

The sound of rustling waters and foam shifting against sand drifted Krystal from her land of dreams into her current situation. As the waves in the distance ebbed, her dreamy conscious drifted away with it. Her eyes cracked open and her ears perked, but the fox girl remained motionless; she had removed her original armor and put on a large T-shirt and the smallest pair of sweat-shorts she could find in Fox’s room (which were still big on her), but the aches of her most recent endeavor still gripped at her bones, making her muscles soft and weary.
“Ugh…morning already?” she said with a light
Funhouse Hunched with the seat of his father’s car, Hugh felt a familiar bump underneath his feet. “You can stop here. This is it.”

“You gonna be okay by yourself?”

“It’s fine. Just wait here. I only need a few minutes.”

Three consecutive taps resounded from off the road as Hugh stepped out of the car—click, clack, click.  His brother watched from the driver’s seat as he reassembled his slumped but towering figure. He waited for the slam of the back door. “I’ll…drive around the block a couple times…”

“Fine, whatever.” And with a pause, the car drove out of Hugh

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Hey, my last deviation had Lucy slapping someone, and now she's slapping someone again. How about that.

Used this as a reference: [link]

I can't seem to leave a pencil sketch alone, it always gets so messy...even though I think it looked better as just pencil sketch. Still, it remains a sketch, so no harsh criticism. I know they look all wonky. At least I got a little practice with slightly action-oriented scenes...sort of.

As for content...Really, the best thing I can say in my defense is I was just in a bad mood.

Maybe you can see this as Lucy, having defended Krystal for so long, finding out about her partnership with Star Wolf, and slapping her, feeling upset and betrayed. Lucy may have been Krystal's friend, but she's the daughter of one of Star Fox's original teammates, and she seemed to want Fox to patch things up with her, so...I'd guess Lucy would be thoroughly pissed. Really Krystal being with Star Wolf hurts everybody, not just Fox.

OR, maybe you could see this is as Lucy taking out her frustration on Krystal because, despite how awesome she is, Krystal remains to be the only real female StarFox character anyone pays attention to. It's not even very good attention, mind you, but maybe Lucy would feel left out.

Either way...sometimes Krystal needs to be taken down a peg.

Again, sorry, bad mood. I'll be nicer next time. Maybe. Though I should probably take a break from StarFox fanart.

No, I don't hate Krystal, I just think she's way too popular for her own good.

Lucy and Krystal (c) Nintendo
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~sfjuoasherpowed Feb 21, 2011
y is she slapping him?
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~Kit-Airheart Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Because...she had it coming?

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."--Brave New World
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~sfjuoasherpowed Feb 22, 2011
o i c. had what coming?
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~phersopiers Sep 3, 2008
It's high time that Krystal gets slapped. Take that for betraying Fox's love!! *slaps krystal*

I still can't get over the horrible command endings. LOL.
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~Kit-Airheart Sep 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I understand, I feel the same way. When it comes to multiple ending, some of them are bound to be bad, but some of those were...just dreadful.

Thank you for the comment.

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."--Brave New World
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~phersopiers Sep 4, 2008
You're welcome. :)

Yeah. Certain endings just don't make sense. It sort of makes the game looked rushed... ... and cheesy.

I hope they put more effort into the next few games. Then again, considering that nintendo out sourced the developing of assault and command (and partly for adventures), they wouldn't have top quality products in the end.

I'm just hoping nintendo sticks to the developing for starfox wii...
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~Kit-Airheart Sep 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I don't think that having the games produced by other companies necessarily makes it bad. I mean, I've had problems with all the games, but overall I enjoyed each one. I suppose a problem could be lack of consistency when it gets passed around like that. There was a lot that I liked about Command, but some of those endings...at times it feels like the bad outweighs the good. What's more is that, from what I can tell, fans seem to like some of these depressing endings. People love Kursed, for example, and I just think that's sad.

At this point I just hope SF Wii is getting developed period. But we shall see, I suppose.

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."--Brave New World
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~phersopiers Sep 5, 2008
Certain endings like the one about dash ruling venom and attacking the lylat system again is utter rubbish. The one on falco teaming up with katt also seemed like last minute ideas. The ending with the f-zero referance seem like a joke to me. (The james mccloud thing, which I find makes the whole game "casual")

I don't know. Somehow the whole storyline for command looked like what a group of 10 year olds would think of. It lacked epicness. Where did the brave and heroic scenes of the past games go?

Now it looked like a bunch of kids whining over love and all. Sorry I'm ranting so much, but I just thought nintendo just let such a huge chance slip away. With the DS capabilities, they could make something more popular than SF64, but they didn't. The rival scenes, the epic battles, the final boss... ...

Also, I wished they'd switch back to the nice old military-based music in the SNES original.

*Stares at the wall of words* Oh dear, so sorry. *runs away* :sprint:
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~Kit-Airheart Sep 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay, I understand what you're saying. I liked Command's new characters and thought the gameplay was fun (though somewhat repetitive), and sometimes the story would go in a good direction ("Goodbye Fox" was as close to epic as the game would go), but...yeah, it could've been better. I'm all for a deeper storyline...but not a soap opera.

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"But I don’t want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."--Brave New World
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~phersopiers Sep 5, 2008
I totally agree.
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